Someone should make a movie starring an average looking frumpy femcel who is convinced some hot billionaire is going to sweet her off her feet. The femcel is friends with another average looking frumpy woman. The movie stars off with the friend getting her mail with some invite to some rich person function she's really excited about to find her billionaire soul mate.
The movie depicts a divergence between the two girlfriends where the femcel girl becomes bitter and resentful that no billionaire will sweet her off her feet. She goes to areas of towns where rich people are known to paruse and she tries really hard to win the billionaires' attention but while she's convinced she's doing good and it's only a matter of time, it's obvious to the viewer that the billionaires don't give a shit about her and even look at her with some disgust.
As this is going on, the friend met an average looking (and I do mean average looking. This needs to be a perfect looks-match to work) guy with an average job/life. They're happy and having a great time. The "darkness" surrounding the femcel (femcel starts doing camwhoring/OF because she thinks she's so hot) & given the comments she makes about men and the relationship the friend is in with the average guy (she says mean things about him) is making it difficult for the friend to continue to be friends but the friend, being a good friend, still wants to help the femcel so she continues to try to give her advice/help.
The friend's boyfriend she's really happy with has a single guy friend (who is a bit of an incel) who is looks-matched great for the femcel. The friend setups a date for both of them. Both the femcel and incel don't want to have the date but begrudgingly agree. The femcel believe she guy is going to be ugly and a loser like the friend's BF. The incel believes the femcel is going to have too high of standards such that he's going to be wasting his time.
They have the date and it goes as expected. Femcel acts like she's a big deal and super hot even mention her OFs. The incel guy says some back-handed "misogynistic" comments and clearly isn't impressed with the femcel's egotistical attidue while the femcel treats the guy like he's an insect she doesn't give a fuck about. The incel is nicer to the waitress and clearly has a sexual interest in her. The femcel sees a rich guy she was trying for at the restaurant on a date and the femcel awkwardly says hi to him (and you can clearly see her mood improve and the way she talks to him all of a sudden becomes nice compared to her attitude to the incel) to try to elicit a positive response from him but the rich guy just brushes her off and is fairly short with her (as expected because he's on a date with another girl). The date ends and both people hate each other. The girl blows up on the friend and they fight because the femcel feel the friend insulted her by even trying to set her up with this looks-matched guy. The friend ends their friendship forever.
The incel takes it a little better and just tells his guy friend it was another waste of time and exactly what he expected, whatever. The incel's friend clearly thinks the problem lies with his guy friend (as evidenced by some of the words he says but he doesn't outright accuse him and let's it be).
The femcel is a total wreck. Her OF isn't taking off and now she doesn't have any friends. She contemplates suicide. Then she finds out her friend is having a wedding through social media because someone else posted something that implied she was invited to the wedding. Thus, it becomes obvious the femcel wasn't invited to the wedding. The femcel is angry and depressed... She decides to hurt her friend by killing the guy her friend is marrying and in her fit of depressed anger she go to their place, and waits until her friend leaves so it's only the guy at the house. She knocks and he answers, she says she was looking for her friend and he nearly tells her to get lost but has a moment of sympathy so decides to invite her in to try to help her. She eventually grabs a knife and kills him then leaves.
The friend is devastated and has no idea what happened. By this point the incel guy finds out about it too and is also heartbroken his friend was murdered.
Later that night the femcel goes on her OF and does a show. In her sex show she has a moment of guilty conscious and kind of admits to what she did but very subtly, such that unless someone knew exactly what happened, they wouldn't really understand what she was saying exactly. Well, it turns out the Incel guy was jerking off to the Femcel's camshow cause he subscribed to her OF after their date and he totally understood exactly what she just said such that he immediately falls the police.
She ends the camshow and a package comes for some stuff she ordered so when she grabs that she also decides to grab her mail. In the mail, it was an invitation to her friend's wedding (it clearly just came a little later) she's contemplating it as police sirens come up to her place and she's arrested.
Movie ends with the Incel and friend holding hands at the funeral for the guy who was murdered.
You lost me here. More believable if it's just a slip up, maybe even near-gloating, or there's something about her body that hints at her involvement. The character you've described up to that point does not care about anyone besides themselves. There's no conscience to have a moment.
Maybe one of her soyboys (OF viewers) says something pertinent to the subject at hand (the murder) and she does a semi self brag before she catches herself and stops for potentially revealing too much but not before she revealed too much such that the incel would understand its meaning.
The "darkness" surrounding the femcel (femcel starts doing camwhoring/OF because she thinks she's so hot)
needs to show her on reddit grifting and destroying the dreams of other young women - “look at me - my billionaire plan is working perfectly. don’t settle for millionaires. you deserve better sister “
Someone should make a movie starring an average looking frumpy femcel who is convinced some hot billionaire is going to sweet her off her feet. The femcel is friends with another average looking frumpy woman. The movie stars off with the friend getting her mail with some invite to some rich person function she's really excited about to find her billionaire soul mate.
The movie depicts a divergence between the two girlfriends where the femcel girl becomes bitter and resentful that no billionaire will sweet her off her feet. She goes to areas of towns where rich people are known to paruse and she tries really hard to win the billionaires' attention but while she's convinced she's doing good and it's only a matter of time, it's obvious to the viewer that the billionaires don't give a shit about her and even look at her with some disgust.
As this is going on, the friend met an average looking (and I do mean average looking. This needs to be a perfect looks-match to work) guy with an average job/life. They're happy and having a great time. The "darkness" surrounding the femcel (femcel starts doing camwhoring/OF because she thinks she's so hot) & given the comments she makes about men and the relationship the friend is in with the average guy (she says mean things about him) is making it difficult for the friend to continue to be friends but the friend, being a good friend, still wants to help the femcel so she continues to try to give her advice/help.
The friend's boyfriend she's really happy with has a single guy friend (who is a bit of an incel) who is looks-matched great for the femcel. The friend setups a date for both of them. Both the femcel and incel don't want to have the date but begrudgingly agree. The femcel believe she guy is going to be ugly and a loser like the friend's BF. The incel believes the femcel is going to have too high of standards such that he's going to be wasting his time.
They have the date and it goes as expected. Femcel acts like she's a big deal and super hot even mention her OFs. The incel guy says some back-handed "misogynistic" comments and clearly isn't impressed with the femcel's egotistical attidue while the femcel treats the guy like he's an insect she doesn't give a fuck about. The incel is nicer to the waitress and clearly has a sexual interest in her. The femcel sees a rich guy she was trying for at the restaurant on a date and the femcel awkwardly says hi to him (and you can clearly see her mood improve and the way she talks to him all of a sudden becomes nice compared to her attitude to the incel) to try to elicit a positive response from him but the rich guy just brushes her off and is fairly short with her (as expected because he's on a date with another girl). The date ends and both people hate each other. The girl blows up on the friend and they fight because the femcel feel the friend insulted her by even trying to set her up with this looks-matched guy. The friend ends their friendship forever.
The incel takes it a little better and just tells his guy friend it was another waste of time and exactly what he expected, whatever. The incel's friend clearly thinks the problem lies with his guy friend (as evidenced by some of the words he says but he doesn't outright accuse him and let's it be).
The femcel is a total wreck. Her OF isn't taking off and now she doesn't have any friends. She contemplates suicide. Then she finds out her friend is having a wedding through social media because someone else posted something that implied she was invited to the wedding. Thus, it becomes obvious the femcel wasn't invited to the wedding. The femcel is angry and depressed... She decides to hurt her friend by killing the guy her friend is marrying and in her fit of depressed anger she go to their place, and waits until her friend leaves so it's only the guy at the house. She knocks and he answers, she says she was looking for her friend and he nearly tells her to get lost but has a moment of sympathy so decides to invite her in to try to help her. She eventually grabs a knife and kills him then leaves.
The friend is devastated and has no idea what happened. By this point the incel guy finds out about it too and is also heartbroken his friend was murdered.
Later that night the femcel goes on her OF and does a show. In her sex show she has a moment of guilty conscious and kind of admits to what she did but very subtly, such that unless someone knew exactly what happened, they wouldn't really understand what she was saying exactly. Well, it turns out the Incel guy was jerking off to the Femcel's camshow cause he subscribed to her OF after their date and he totally understood exactly what she just said such that he immediately falls the police.
She ends the camshow and a package comes for some stuff she ordered so when she grabs that she also decides to grab her mail. In the mail, it was an invitation to her friend's wedding (it clearly just came a little later) she's contemplating it as police sirens come up to her place and she's arrested.
Movie ends with the Incel and friend holding hands at the funeral for the guy who was murdered.
You lost me here. More believable if it's just a slip up, maybe even near-gloating, or there's something about her body that hints at her involvement. The character you've described up to that point does not care about anyone besides themselves. There's no conscience to have a moment.
That's fair. It's a rough draft.
Maybe one of her soyboys (OF viewers) says something pertinent to the subject at hand (the murder) and she does a semi self brag before she catches herself and stops for potentially revealing too much but not before she revealed too much such that the incel would understand its meaning.
needs to show her on reddit grifting and destroying the dreams of other young women - “look at me - my billionaire plan is working perfectly. don’t settle for millionaires. you deserve better sister “