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The key to good writing to to be logically consistent in your characterization. You can create a SJW in your writing that is compellingly consistent, but in real life, people are very, VERY stupid, and very, VERY easily manipulated. NPC patch updates happen weekly, and will completely rewrite their worldview in a matter of minutes, and they'll act as if they've been that way the entire time.
Your issue is you're writing a SJW taken within a snapshot of time, and expanding outwards chronologically as to how that entity would act in the past and future, when really what you should be writing is a Murder-Bot-3000 with severe internet connectivity issues that continuously gets failed partial firmware updates but applies them anyways.