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The problem with the sexual assault as a reason for someone no longer tolerating the empire is that its cliched as heck and if your writing is on par with sword art online and other trash tier anime which repeatedly used sexual assault to push the plot along your story is awfully written.

Add in glacial pacing and I'm wondering exactly what the point of that scene was because it didn't really advance the plot and it certainly didn't distinguish itself from the many many other sexual assault scenes in other media.

1 year ago
3 score
Reason: Original

The problem with the sexual assault as a reason for someone no longer tolerating the empire is that its cliched as heck and if you're writing is on par with sword art online and other trash tier anime which repeatedly used sexual assault to push the plot along your story is awfully written.

Add in glacial pacing and I'm wondering exactly what the point of that scene was because it didn't really advance the plot and it certainly didn't distinguish itself from the many many other sexual assault scenes in other media.

1 year ago
1 score