First chapter was fine, but might have an unreliable MC. Would not be surprised to see it swerve into "there were never aliens, you've been eating people," later.
Also... the sperm ships, dick noses (that go rigid when they die), and 4chan saying the mangaka is a lesbian who likes male-humiliation themes... it could go some other places too.
That Happy Alien edit isn't going away any time soon though.
Yeah that’s kind of my fear after reading the first chapter. I find the whole “those monsters you’ve been killing were actually peeeeeeepooooolllee!!!” twist incredibly lame.
same, rank it a bit more annoying then deus ex machina bullshit with no foreshadowing or plausable reason. the you bastards twist as i call that tactic is just a cheap simpathy ploy. it can work but it takes a LOT of effort and set up to pull off if its not in play day one but your plot will start to resemble the movie version of game of thrones.
First chapter was fine, but might have an unreliable MC. Would not be surprised to see it swerve into "there were never aliens, you've been eating people," later.
Also... the sperm ships, dick noses (that go rigid when they die), and 4chan saying the mangaka is a lesbian who likes male-humiliation themes... it could go some other places too.
That Happy Alien edit isn't going away any time soon though.
Yeah that’s kind of my fear after reading the first chapter. I find the whole “those monsters you’ve been killing were actually peeeeeeepooooolllee!!!” twist incredibly lame.
same, rank it a bit more annoying then deus ex machina bullshit with no foreshadowing or plausable reason. the you bastards twist as i call that tactic is just a cheap simpathy ploy. it can work but it takes a LOT of effort and set up to pull off if its not in play day one but your plot will start to resemble the movie version of game of thrones.