It's an important story but your editorialized title once again hurts you and the message. Not that the BBC's title puke ("landmark move") is much better.
No that's your opinion. Editorialized means you changed the original title, here in an attempt to make your point about "the gays". You should be adapting your message to the audience. Was adding some clever stinger like "rainbow ruse" necessary? If you must add opinion you should be trying to piggy-back on top of the LGBT bill instead of telling us the things we value are wrong. Something like...
"It gets worse: Along with the LGBT bill Japan passes wide-ranging feminist re-write of rape laws"
Then put your bullet points about why it's bad in a comment. You could even end the comment with "Honestly I think the LGBT bill was a distraction. This is far worse for men."
Your tactic is instead to run around screaming LISTEN TO ME YOU FOOLS while slapping people and calling them idiots, simps, stormcucks, and allies of TERFs. One of the reasons people cannot take you seriously is that you don't even seem to be trying.
It's an important story but your editorialized title once again hurts you and the message. Not that the BBC's title puke ("landmark move") is much better.
No that's your opinion. Editorialized means you changed the original title, here in an attempt to make your point about "the gays". You should be adapting your message to the audience. Was adding some clever stinger like "rainbow ruse" necessary? If you must add opinion you should be trying to piggy-back on top of the LGBT bill instead of telling us the things we value are wrong. Something like...
"It gets worse: Along with the LGBT bill Japan passes wide-ranging feminist re-write of rape laws"
Then put your bullet points about why it's bad in a comment. You could even end the comment with "Honestly I think the LGBT bill was a distraction. This is far worse for men."
Your tactic is instead to run around screaming LISTEN TO ME YOU FOOLS while slapping people and calling them idiots, simps, stormcucks, and allies of TERFs. One of the reasons people cannot take you seriously is that you don't even seem to be trying.
but what about lesbians or ftm who want to date gay guys? 🤔