Depends how it's framed. There's certainly potential to explore interesting ideas and imagine the pros/cons of such a society, but otherwise it's a very broad premise that doesn't tell me if I'd like anything about the book.
What kind of factions or competing interests would there be? What perspective is the story told from? What values are in contention? Is there any conflict to be resolved or what would promote character development?
If literally all you've got is "There's no brown people here, all women belong in the kitchen and are happy, and there's nothing wrong with this utopia" then it's going to be just as boring as any communist fanfic the left would write.
I was thinking more of a blurb rather than the entire plot(the thing that goes on the back of the book that most people use to decide whether they would want to buy it). You still haven't given me much of a hook, just a setting.
Most stories have characters; who would we be following and why should we care about them? A down-on-his-luck incel dreaming of joining the army and turning into a giga-chad? Pacifistic office worker drafted into frontline combat having to resolve internal conflict between their non-violence and duty to serve? Young, rebellious woman who wants to be more than breeding apparatus, but doesn't know what else she could be(or maybe a Mulan-type join the mans' army)?
Those are just some half-arsed ideas, but it would go a long way to letting people know what kind of story you're actually trying to tell.
Depends how it's framed. There's certainly potential to explore interesting ideas and imagine the pros/cons of such a society, but otherwise it's a very broad premise that doesn't tell me if I'd like anything about the book.
What kind of factions or competing interests would there be? What perspective is the story told from? What values are in contention? Is there any conflict to be resolved or what would promote character development?
If literally all you've got is "There's no brown people here, all women belong in the kitchen and are happy, and there's nothing wrong with this utopia" then it's going to be just as boring as any communist fanfic the left would write.
I was thinking more of a blurb rather than the entire plot(the thing that goes on the back of the book that most people use to decide whether they would want to buy it). You still haven't given me much of a hook, just a setting.
Most stories have characters; who would we be following and why should we care about them? A down-on-his-luck incel dreaming of joining the army and turning into a giga-chad? Pacifistic office worker drafted into frontline combat having to resolve internal conflict between their non-violence and duty to serve? Young, rebellious woman who wants to be more than breeding apparatus, but doesn't know what else she could be(or maybe a Mulan-type join the mans' army)?
Those are just some half-arsed ideas, but it would go a long way to letting people know what kind of story you're actually trying to tell.