Exactly. These shit-tier writers never heard of "show, don't tell". Imagine if every time you walked up to the bar the bartender told you what her personality is like. There's zero immersion in trash writing like this, because normal people don't talk like this.
Exactly. These shit-tier writers never heard of "show, don't tell". Imagine if every time you walked up to the bar the bartender told you what her personality is like. There's zero immersion in trash writing like this, because normal people don't talk like this.