Not the primary point, but...this fucker used two commas in five generally large paragraphs. I know I might use too many commas, but come on. This 'college student's' writing just feels incredibly simplistic. I used two commas just in this one paragraph, naturally. Now three. He's just like 'words period words period words period.' Aside from periods, the only other punctuation is...he only (grossly mis)uses hyphens, uses one slash, and then uses parentheses with broken grammar. He correctly uses apostrophes, that's pretty much the best I can say.
Also, what the fuck is a 'pro-feminist' stance/event anyway? Feminism is already an (allegedly) 'pro-woman' movement, so does 'pro-feminist' mean 'pro-pro-women?' It would just be a 'feminist event,' not a 'pro-feminist event.'
This dude comes across as a not terrible bright or introspective guy who got absorbed into the cult. Possibly also autistic.
Ugh, I'm just so tired of these sorts of people. Modern society is massively fucked. It makes me feel a little hopeless sometimes, having these brainlets running around. So thanks for that, OP. The only positive with these people is that, if things swing, they're so unquestioning that they'll suddenly be on our side, if that's the popular view. Normies taketh, but normies also giveth. This is basically the definition of an NPC; if we can reprogram him, he'll instantly flip, without even realizing it.
Not the primary point, but...this fucker used two commas in five generally large paragraphs. I know I might use too many commas, but come on. This 'college student's' writing just feels incredibly simplistic. I used two commas just in this one paragraph, naturally. Now three. He's just like 'words period words period words period.' Aside from periods, the only other punctuation is...he only (grossly mis)uses hyphens, uses one slash, and then uses parentheses with broken grammar. He correctly uses apostrophes, that's pretty much the best I can say.
Also, what the fuck is a 'pro-feminist' stance/event anyway? Feminism is already an (allegedly) 'pro-woman' movement, so does 'pro-feminist' mean 'pro-pro-women?' It would just be a 'feminist event,' not a 'pro-feminist event.'
This dude comes across as a not terrible bright or introspective guy who got absorbed into the cult. Possibly also autistic.
Ugh, I'm just so tired of these sorts of people. Modern society is massively fucked. It makes me feel a little hopeless sometimes, having these brainlets running around. So thanks for that, OP. The only positive with these people is that, if things swing, they're so unquestioning that they'll suddenly be on our side, if that's the popular view. Normies taketh, but normies also giveth. This is basically the definition of an NPC; if we can reprogram him, he'll instantly flip, without even realizing it.