you're not wrong in that most of it is in the build up and dread, but still, for me that reveal is enhanced by it being first person.
Tightening the pov and making it feel as though something is behind you the whole time, all the time that the dread is being built, that is also enhanced by it being first person imo.
you're not wrong in that most of it is in the build up and dread, but still, for me that reveal is enhanced by it being first person.
Tightening the pov and making it feel as though something is behind you the whole time, all the time that the dread is being built, that is also enhanced by it being first person imo.